~: M H O :~ .... My love... ( My new poem)...

 

Hi All,

 

Please give me your feedback on my poem below...

 

Please feel free to point out if there any mistakes or anything that the poem lacks...

 

 

I silently keep missin u wen the nites are long my lov..

Evryday i keep thinkin of u my lov..

Wid every beat of d heart ur face cums in frnt of my eyes my love..

Wid every breath dat goes in I feel as if ur widin me my love..

Wid every wink of d eye i believe u r lukin at me my love..

Wen m standin out lukin at d sky i feel dat u r watchin me frm ther my love..

I knw dis soul yearns for ur lov my love..

U dnt even knw wat I go thru wen u ain't round my lov..

Wen wud u open up2 me n giv me all ur lov my lov..

Believe me wen i say I want u in my life my lov..

If for 1ce u cud tel me wat u r felin my lov..

Who knws we cud get his blessings from above my lov..

Cry 4 me nly if u fel dat i dserve ur tears my lov..

Miss me nly if u cnt bear d distance lyk me my lov..

M tird of expresin myself thru words my lov..

I luk 4wd 2 dat day wen u wud realize d intensity of my lov 4 u my lov..

Evry mument wid u is stil fresh in my heart my lov..

Dese eyes are still waitin to see you my lov..

If you cud make out the pain out of which i've written dis my lov..

You would count the number of times I've mentioned your name my lov.

Dnt get cnfusd tryin to search ur name my lov..

You were and will always remain MY LOV....

 

Sincerely awaiting for a feedback form the MHO group....

 

Thanks and regards

 

Nikhil N... A child waiting to be a man....

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